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How to Write a Video Script That Gets Views

Veritasium makes videos about bearing friction, general relativity and the mathematics of voting, and has passed 20 million subscribers and 4 billion views doing it. Derek Muller, who runs it, has described his own method as a formula: V = (M + (Q→E)) × (A + B). M is the wrong answer your viewer already believes. Q→E is asking the question before you give the explanation. A and B are two stories running at the same time. He did not invent those three ideas, and that is the useful part, because each one was tested separately in peer-reviewed work before he put them together. The planner below turns your own topic into a timed beat sheet built on that order.

Interactive video script planner that turns a topic into a timed beat sheet with word budgets

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The score is the formula itself, worked out on what you have typed. M scores 1 when you have named a wrong belief, Q→E scores 1 when you have written a question, A scores 1 when you have named a topic, and B scores 1 when you have picked a second story. The two brackets are then multiplied, exactly as written, so the highest score is 4 and any empty bracket takes the whole thing to 0. That is the point of the multiplication sign and it is why the number falls off a cliff rather than sliding.

Word budgets use 150 words per minute, which is the usual pace for narrated explainer video. Cut the numbers if your video carries long silent demonstrations. Raise them if you talk fast over static shots.

Videos of two minutes or more get eleven beats, because a second story needs room to open, run into trouble and pay off. Anything shorter gets five, because under two minutes a second story cannot do those three things and trying costs you the explanation. Picking "No second story" removes the B beats and spreads their time across the rest.

The beat weights are a working template rather than a measurement. No published study has tested this running order against another one, so treat the order of the beats as the researched part and the exact seconds as a starting point to edit.

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Illustration: a speech bubble containing a crooked shape sits in front of a viewer's head, and a matching crooked shape inside the head lines up with it

Open with the wrong answer your viewer believes, because a clear explanation changes nothing

Before Veritasium existed, Derek Muller spent a PhD at the University of Sydney testing whether teaching videos teach. The answer he got is the reason his videos are built the way they are, and it is not a comfortable one for anyone who has ever tried to explain something well.

Version of the lessonWhat students said about itWhat happened to their scoresWorth writing this way
Plain lectureConcise, clear, easy to understand, low effortNo change from before they watchedNo, and it raised false confidence
Lecture plus extra materialInteresting, still easy to followNo meaningful gain over the plain lectureNo, longer changed nothing
Wrong beliefs stated and refutedConfusing, hard workMiddle of the class up to the top thirdYes, one of the two that worked
Student and tutor arguing it outConfusing, hard workMiddle of the class up to the top third, the largest gain measuredYes, the strongest of the four

So the first line of your script is not your topic. It is the sentence your viewer would say if you stopped them in the street and asked.

Illustration: a large question mark stands ahead of a smaller lightbulb on a path, with the order of the two marked by an arrow

Ask your question before you explain, because a wrong guess lifts test scores from 56% to 75%

The second letter of the formula is an arrow: question, then explanation, never the other way round. This one is not Muller's finding at all. It comes from five separate memory experiments run at UCLA and published in 2009, and it is one of the cleanest results in the whole of learning research.

ExperimentAsked the questions firstGiven extra time to study insteadWhat asking first was worth
1, plain essay75% of the final test correct56% correctUp 19 points
2, key lines italicised71% correct54% correctUp 17 points
3, key lines in bold82% correct64% correctUp 18 points
4, harder rewritten questions55% correct45% correctUp 10 points
5, answering versus only reading the question90% correct63% correctUp 27 points

The practical rule is small and strict. Every time your script is about to explain something, put a question in front of it and leave a gap where the viewer can be wrong.

A looping arrow around a microphone, showing a recording playing straight back

Use Repeat Recorder to hear your script back before you film it

The two rules above are both easy to break by accident, and you only catch it out loud. A wrong belief that sounds like a script stops being a belief, and a question you already know the answer to comes out flat. Repeat Recorder, one of my own apps, replays each take a second after you stop talking, so you hear the problem while you still remember what you were trying to do.

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Run a second story beside the explanation, because stories are remembered about twice as well

The last bracket of the formula is A plus B, and both letters are plots. Screenwriting has used the pair for decades: the A story is what the film is about, the B story runs beside it and usually carries the meaning the A story cannot state out loud. Muller runs the same pair in a science video, and the reason it works has been measured. Two plots also mean two chances a viewer keeps hold of one of them.

Illustration: two filled boxes multiplied together with a tall bar rising above them, and beside them the same pair with one box left empty and only a flat line above

Multiply the teaching by the story, never add them, because either one alone scores zero

The sign in the middle of the formula is the part people skip, and it is doing the most work of any character in it.

The story half is what gets the video watched. The teaching half is what makes having watched it worth anything.

Illustration: a row of blocks running across the frame with one gap near the left end, and a hand lowering a coral block down into that gap

Write your opening 15 seconds last, because you only find the sharpest wrong answer at the end

The opening is the one part of a script that cannot be written in order. You are trying to state a belief in the exact words that make the rest of the video inevitable, and you do not know what those words are until the rest of the video exists.

What the video coversThe opening that losesThe opening that winsWhat the swap adds
How a plane flies"Today I am going to explain how a wing generates lift.""Air moves faster over the top of a wing, so the wing lifts. That is what nearly everyone is taught. So how does a plane fly upside down?"Both, it names the wrong answer and asks
Compound interest"In this video we will look at how compound interest works.""Would you take a million pounds today, or one penny that doubles every day for a month?"The question only
Why the sky is blue"The sky is blue because of Rayleigh scattering.""The sky is blue because air scatters blue light. If that is the whole story, why is the sunset red?"Both, it names the wrong answer and asks
A software demo"Our app has three key features I want to show you.""Almost everyone backs up their photos and never opens them again. Here is what that habit actually costs."The wrong answer only
A tutorial"Hi everyone, welcome back to the channel.""You are about to make the mistake I made for two years. Can you spot it before I say it?"Both, it names the wrong answer and asks
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Use Camera to Clipboard to get a whiteboard script plan onto your computer

Beat sheets get drawn on paper and whiteboards, because eleven beats are easier to shuffle by hand than in a document. Retyping that plan afterwards is where a good half of it quietly goes missing. Camera to Clipboard, another of my own apps, photographs the board on your phone and puts the picture straight onto your computer's clipboard.

Illustration: two shapes of the same kind sit apart with a clear gap between them, and the gap is drawn as a bright wedge pulling them together

Put the wrong belief in your title, because the gap between wrong and right earns the click

The formula stops at the script, but the script never gets a chance unless the title does its own version of the same job. The mechanism has a name and a literature, and it explains why a title about your subject does nothing while a title about a belief does a great deal.

The rest of that argument, tested on real A/B data rather than on brain scans, is in How to Write a Headline That Gets Clicked.

Illustration: a hand offering a key beside a door that has no keyhole, with a second door nearby that does have one

Never invent a wrong belief your viewer does not hold, because an unasked question opens no gap

This is the part that gets copied badly. Once you know the opening should name a wrong belief, it is tempting to write one, and a manufactured wrong belief is exactly what people mean when they say clickbait.

A looping arrow around a microphone, showing a recording playing straight back

Use Repeat Recorder to check your script fits the time you planned

A beat sheet gives every section a word budget, and word budgets lie. Repeat Recorder, one of my own apps, gives you the real number by playing each beat straight back at you.

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Check what this formula cannot do, because the studies measured learning and not views

Everything above is worth using, and none of it is worth overclaiming. The evidence under the three ingredients is strong. The evidence that the assembled formula produces views is a single very successful channel, which is not the same thing.

Conclusion: how to write a video script that gets views, in one glance

The list runs from the change that alters the script most to the change that alters it least. The first four are the formula itself and the rest are how to run it.